nice piece

interesting concept and very fluid motion....
nice job there

interesting

actually i like the tune
but the drums dont really seem to fit properly in this piece

ill suggest lowering the volume of the drums and emphasize certain needed portions

btw nice way to end

needs fine tuning

the tempo seems fine to me but the only thing thats gonna kill the song is the keys being offset

ill say that when working with music of this tempo, trying constructing the piece at a slower tempo, maybe half or quarter of the speed so you can get better precession for the notes

not bad

sounds like a waltz piece
and this loops well suprisingly!